Friday, 22 June 2018

i have a choice pome


supermarket

When I was a child my brothers and I    
had a choice.Stay in the car or go into
the supermarket for the monthly shop.
I stay in the
Car in was looking round
for something to do.

Digging round in
the glove box.
I found old books

but they were in a
different language now how
Am i meant to read this?

Oh grate the boys now
are screaming at each other
Oh and Tai’s crying


Goodbye old life
Helloooo angry
brothers

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Rata!! It's Iris From Totara 2 here!
    Good writing! Maybe next time you could work one your spelling and capital letters. I like the way you have written it!
    Good Work!!
    Iris

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