Hey Rata, Thank you for sharing your learning with us. Can you believe how many poor horses were killed in the war? I think it is so sad the amount of poor innocent horses that were used in battle. What was the most interesting thing that you learnt from researching about the animals that went to war? Keep up the great posting. Miss H :-)
Hi there my name is Elizabeth and I'm a year 8 at Kaingaroa school. It is so sad to hear about what the animals did and died doing it. I like how you put in the pictures that back you up on your information. My feed back to you would be to check your writing to see if it makes sense and, to use more punctuation and capital letters.
hi there my name is lyric i am a year 7 at kaingaroa school. It is so sad that animals use to do that to save peoples lives. I think you should work on your sentence structure.
Hey Rata,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your learning with us. Can you believe how many poor horses were killed in the war? I think it is so sad the amount of poor innocent horses that were used in battle. What was the most interesting thing that you learnt from researching about the animals that went to war?
Keep up the great posting.
Miss H :-)
Hi my name is Crez i'm from kaingaroa school. This is good next time you should use more full stop's ?
ReplyDeleteHi there my name is Elizabeth and I'm a year 8 at Kaingaroa school.
ReplyDeleteIt is so sad to hear about what the animals did and died doing it.
I like how you put in the pictures that back you up on your information.
My feed back to you would be to check your writing to see if it makes sense and, to use more punctuation and capital letters.
Hi I am Aneika from Kaingaroa.
ReplyDeleteFist of all I love the fate that you care about horses and animals because I do to. Next time use more punctuation.
hi there my name is lyric i am a year 7 at kaingaroa school. It is so sad that animals use to do that to save peoples lives.
ReplyDeleteI think you should work on your sentence structure.